in this case, love is better the second time around. thanks for the great read!
To quote you, You already know I like it... :-) Great short story well told. Now hurry up with the next one!
Well written, a nice phrase or two (breasts like erotic pillows isn't half bad). Now give us a plot twist; so far the story has been rather too predictable.
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short and sweet....
in this case, love is better the second time around. thanks for the great read!
Well...
To quote you,
You already know I like it... :-)
Great short story well told. Now hurry up with the next one!
not bad
Well written, a nice phrase or two (breasts like erotic pillows isn't half bad). Now give us a plot twist; so far the story has been rather too predictable.
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