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Anonymousover 9 years agonice.. lovely imagery and truth. i smile.
Poetry is more than words or grammer.
Why use new lines to imply glamour?
natural is, natural does.
no need for is or were or was.
Lovely images deftly painted,
Stylist bound, slightly tainted.
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