homeErotic PoetryJust a DreamPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Just a Dream

bysecretme©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Tarakin03/22/08

I like it

Good ending! Very impressiv. Write some more, please!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/06/10

Beautiful

Just one word is needed. BEAUTIFUL!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/25/13

love it

can't vote for some reason, but if i could this poem would recieve 5 stars

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Just a Dream  or
More submissions by secretme.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel