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by Anonymous

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Great story

Your writing always seems so flawless and seamless; the storylines tangible and real. I find your talent quite brilliant. This story was so very endearing and the language was impeccable; used to great effect. I hope one day that I can even half way write a story to these standards.

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by Anonymous05/21/08

The Thrill of First Time

Your stories are terrific. The telling of the Gay men sex act is out of this world. I will look for more.

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by Anonymous06/27/11

Across the Threshold

Hi,
I am a mature bisexual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much, in fact I have read several of your stories, and you are one of my favorite authors in Litererotica.
Sincerely,
Josie of Augusta, Georgia

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by Anonymous09/01/14

Very good!

You painted a vivid picture of how it feels being throughly fucked for the very first time and this deserves 5 stars!

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