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are u shitting me
Short but sweet
I had seen this story posted, but avoided it because I thought it was two couples--- I realized it was a 2 on 1 deal, and decided to read it. It was very nice. Slow, sweet, and also exciting. It can only get better, which is good. :) Reading on!
Very, very hot. I rated some of the chapters as 4 stars and the other chapters as 5. The mechanics of the writing were nearly word-perfect. (I've gotten into some "smack talk" with other writers who do not do a decent job of editing and proofing.) Sorry to send this anonymously, but I've been away from Literotica for a while and their system recognizes my email address but I have forgotten my user name and password.
Very...very..
...biblical. Mark and David are common enough, but Esther? Heh. It's like a biblical menage. Please tell me their last name is Herod.
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