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Wow!
Everything about this was fabulous, the description of her feelings, the slow build up. Wonderful stuff. I especially loved the dialogue, the way they teased each other. So true to life, and so damned hot at the same time!
More--please--and soon!
Best first date ever!
I loved the first part of this story and I am glad to see that the second part is just as wonderful! This is the hottest first date ever- kinda makes me wish I was on that date...
Total heat.
You must write more! This story is sooo intriguing and so well written! I can tell that you've mapped out your plot line and I can't wait to be spun into the web that you're creating.
Plus Sean is hot. My dream man. And Ana is gorgeous, the kind of girl I'd want to be friends with and the kind I can relate to.
Anyways just please write more. Thanks! :)
Oh my...you get even better?
Love it! Love it! Love it!
:_) Great
this is the most shallow boring story i ever read in literotica. Okay. so this guy in a suit comes over to this girl in strut your stuff clothing and talk. Then ask for his email themn go out and talk. Then seduce her in a carpark and say nexttime.
Real Romance!
Not just lust but an interesting pair of characters and a great story line. Good Job!
DLyn
I love this so far! And it's finished too, which is a bonus, because I can read it all in one go. Really really good stuff.
intoxicating
the whole piece is intoxicating ... breathtaking ... wow.
Scorching!
The chemistry between these two is insanely intense. I felt like I was on fire! This is my second read and I think they became more hot. You're a lovely and very talented author. I hope to read more of your work :)
Scorching
Heat from them, I am excited to read about them...
Fuck.
This gets hotter every time I read it. You half expect him to hike her leg around his waist and take her right there.
A new writer?
Holy fuck you rock!!!
WOW!!!!!
Intoxicating!!!
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