Yes finally an update. And is was well worth the wait. I didn't realise that Ann's brother was the same Cade from undercover, until you spelled it out for me. lol.
Keep 'em coming!
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Anonymous03/14/08
good...
to see that you're back! Please update soon, don't keep us waiting too long. Didn't catch the reference to Cade of Undercover until I read the other poster's comments. Nice sequel, made me want to read Undercover again. =)
I enjoy your stories. I think she should just enjoy being alone in a cabin with a guy she obviously finds quite attractive. Cut back on the snarling and get to purring ;)
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Anonymous03/15/08
OMG!!!
i hope more of this story is coming soon this is sooo hottt
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Anonymous03/15/08
I love it
This is a great story and extremely well written. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Anonymous03/15/08
Amazing !
I'm amazed at the number of readers who think a story about a macho thug and a young girl is interesting. I think the two of them should get their guns and hunt down her evil bastard of a brother, then maybe Ann could shoot her brothers friend and live in peace.
the Ct. Yankee
Yeeeee
Yes finally an update. And is was well worth the wait. I didn't realise that Ann's brother was the same Cade from undercover, until you spelled it out for me. lol.
Keep 'em coming!
good...
to see that you're back! Please update soon, don't keep us waiting too long. Didn't catch the reference to Cade of Undercover until I read the other poster's comments. Nice sequel, made me want to read Undercover again. =)
oooh
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Very nice
I enjoy your stories. I think she should just enjoy being alone in a cabin with a guy she obviously finds quite attractive. Cut back on the snarling and get to purring ;)
OMG!!!
i hope more of this story is coming soon this is sooo hottt
I love it
This is a great story and extremely well written. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Amazing !
I'm amazed at the number of readers who think a story about a macho thug and a young girl is interesting. I think the two of them should get their guns and hunt down her evil bastard of a brother, then maybe Ann could shoot her brothers friend and live in peace.
the Ct. Yankee
Yea
Glad to see you decided to continue the series. Good job.
love it!
so glad you've started a new story, i can't wait to read more! please post a new chapter soon!!
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