by PurrfectKitten22
loved the story! great all around details..my only suggestion for the next part would be to include specific details on what the characters look like.
This is a great story Now that the Sisters have exchanged
Info..You have to Follow-up with another Chapter.
Gotta see where this Goes who knows Maybe both Sisters will Do Daddy ?
God that was sooo good. I feel sooo wet now, can't wait to read more you dirty girl
Wow...It was nice reading a story that didn't have any spelling errors and was written by someone who actually speaks english. I hope there will be a continuation of this story!
Great story,I love your writing style, you paint a beautiful story. I cant wait to read how the story continues and the father daughter relationship builds.
Any chance we'll ever see a sequel? Very hot stuff.
I like how your viewpoint character goes through such a realistic progression of emotions, and how well set up your scenario is. Really good.
Excellent. Great imagination, wonderful descriptions. And hot as can be.
this was a so good story. if you did really but in the story how old the are now then was it a bit nicer. but is was verry good
I found the story line outstanding. It followed a step by step progression from comfort to support to finally loving. The introspection of the sister is an example worth what would have happened in real like. I am only sorry that the story ended here. I would have like to see the older sister, help the younger sister step and that take her place. To pass on the love.
nice story, well written but a few mistakes, towards the end the older saister says that their daddy was going to turn himself into the please, should that not be the police.?
need to continue with the story
It's been 12 years since you posted anything.. too bad would live a continuation of this story. I can see easily 2 or 3 more Chapters.
Even with the couple typos, I give this ★★★★★