All Comments on 'Daddy's Two Girls'

by PurrfectKitten22

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wow!

loved the story! great all around details..my only suggestion for the next part would be to include specific details on what the characters look like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it

very hot and very sexy. Can't wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Follow-up?

Hope to read more from this soon!

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Chapter#2

This is a great story Now that the Sisters have exchanged

Info..You have to Follow-up with another Chapter.

Gotta see where this Goes who knows Maybe both Sisters will Do Daddy ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
so fucking hot

God that was sooo good. I feel sooo wet now, can't wait to read more you dirty girl

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wow

Wow...It was nice reading a story that didn't have any spelling errors and was written by someone who actually speaks english. I hope there will be a continuation of this story!

kevfun714kevfun714almost 13 years ago
more......More.......MORE

Great story,I love your writing style, you paint a beautiful story. I cant wait to read how the story continues and the father daughter relationship builds.

twistedjoe37twistedjoe37over 12 years ago
Great story!

Any chance we'll ever see a sequel? Very hot stuff.

I like how your viewpoint character goes through such a realistic progression of emotions, and how well set up your scenario is. Really good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot, horny, perverted

Excellent. Great imagination, wonderful descriptions. And hot as can be.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Fucking hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
soo good story

this was a so good story. if you did really but in the story how old the are now then was it a bit nicer. but is was verry good

rp2oconnorrp2oconnorover 8 years ago
An honest flowing story of love and a bit of sex

I found the story line outstanding. It followed a step by step progression from comfort to support to finally loving. The introspection of the sister is an example worth what would have happened in real like. I am only sorry that the story ended here. I would have like to see the older sister, help the younger sister step and that take her place. To pass on the love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
good

nice story, well written but a few mistakes, towards the end the older saister says that their daddy was going to turn himself into the please, should that not be the police.?

need to continue with the story

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

It's been 12 years since you posted anything.. too bad would live a continuation of this story. I can see easily 2 or 3 more Chapters.

Even with the couple typos, I give this ★★★★★

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