All Comments on 'The Other Man'

You pack a lot of punch into a very short story. Great setup. Makes me want to try to write a "short". It takes me a thousand words to get her bra off. Looking forward to your next one.

Very good intro, believable build up, and excellent conclusion. An A+ erotic story that went exactly far enough and not over the line. Please write more.

Please don't let this be the end. Let's have a follow up or lots of follow ups.

Loved it! There has to be more, more, more! Well written!

This is just too good. You must follow it up with further chapters - please!

That was so well described, very refreshing, avoiding the usual cliches - It certainly got me wet. Keep going!

I love this story. It is very well written, and extremely horny to read. You should write more dirty yarns, you are good at it

Brilliant, but need more.

Reading this and Closetblonde bio concluded this is not a story.

Not surprisingly no more from this source.

AMerryMan

As a male I found this incredibly informative of how a woman experiences being licked out. In fact my biggest fantasy is to be a woman just for one day just to get the feel of a cock penetrating my pussy.

This story tells so wonderfully what it's like to unexpectantly experience the total joy of lesbian love and to know that you will have to have it all your life.

Wow. She cheats on her Husband with his Ex. Now every time she sees her Ex Husband she'll know she had sex with his wife and cucked hom. No thought even entered her mind of staying Loyal to her Husband either. Nope, she went straight for her Lezzy fantasy. People like that shouldn't get married. I find cheating of any kind a fucking turnoff.