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Enchanted Twelve: Ariel Ch. 02

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by Tarakin03/17/08

Very nice story!

A very nice story. I loved the scene where she surprised and helped him. Very insightful written. Can't wait for the third part!

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by RedHairedandFriendly03/26/08

Sweet tale...

I am truly enjoying the "sweetness" of your characters. I sit here and imagine a lovely setting with a couple of innocent characters that are simply enjoying the moment and falling in love. Another excellent story and a great addition to your prolific writing. ~ Red

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