by patricia51
on this site and I continue to be encouraged by your work. What a delightful story that contained all of the essentials, exciting sex, wonderful loving relationships that are mutually supporting and a twist at the end where the story didn't go where I thought it would. A wonderful read!
As is the case with most of your works, this one is just same-oh, same-oh...promiscuous or adulterous sex without consequences.<p>
I know that you are a feminist and bi-lesbian, but in most cases cheating women do get caught, and pay some consequence. (As do cheating men, but I am sure you admit to that)<p>
Have a good day!
Did they really have to do that? but then it was a loving friendship. One question will they ever tell the husbands. some secrets get found out and it might be better coming from them rather than the husbands finding out.
The pace you set is uniquely yours, rich with details and observations and yet it does not get in the way of the flow of the plot. <P>
I am used to seeing mumbo jumbo of the likes of the previous two comments but with such mastery of story telling it simply hurts to see such injustice provided instead of applause. <P>
I particularly liked the subtext of the tension between past memories and present relations (including with the husbands). The outcome confirms my conviction about wise women who know how to manage their emotional lives so well. They never abandoned their old friendships and never betrayed their now life long love and friendship with their husbands, even if for some skinny dipping is equal to a crime worth capital punishment...
kolkore you misunderstand me I like this story and you are quite right Patricia is a great writer there is nothing wrong with the writing it is just i personally think they could tell the husbands and actually have fun with it but that is just my opinion which doesn't count for anything.