by Pilot4029
All three parts were great, the way you upped the suspense and the release in the final part was very hot.
Easily one of the hottest stories ever I have read involving mother dominating son. I think it's playful with lots of foreplay and fantasies and that makes it very, very hot.
All "chapters" combined makes for 3 short pages. Some great material here, but about a 10th of a story, so you get 4 stars instead of 5. Probably should have been 3 since it appears that you've abandoned the story... Such a shame.