A Night in Heaven and Hell

wow

I skipped over this story the first time I saw it. I was bored, so I was just here reading various stories. At first, when I saw the length, I thought it would probably be boring, and not worth reading. I am so glad I decided to go ahead. Normally, on a story this length, I would say it needed more build up, more characterization. That is not the case here. I LOVED this story. It was wonderfully written. I wish I could say I loved "this". But I can't, the whole story just pulled at me. Well done. (by the way, I chose the wrong brother for heaven)

That was quite a ride

nicely done.

interesting ending

I chose the wrong way around...but then again that's what you meant us all to do anyway

Well I was wrong too

Well baby, I was wrong. I thought that it was the other way around

Hehe.

Brilliant story, and it seems I chose right. The information about the brothers given seemed a little too cut and dry, and I had a feeling something was off, so I went with my gut.

Peter?

So who is Peter? At the very very stArt of the story it says "while Peter was single"

I liked it. What a twist at the end!