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by Anonymous03/17/08

The ending...

was not quite up to your usual superb level. Nan was not in character with her actions and the rest of the story was just a tad too condensed. That being said, you are still one of my favorites. Hopefully you will do another cheating wife tale soon.

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by Anonymous03/17/08

I agree

with the other poster that the ending was abrupt. It seemed way too easy. But all things considered, it was a good novel. Thanks for sharing your talent, and keep on writing!

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by Anonymous12/24/16

the...

ending was not what I was expecting - nice anyways

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