This is never going to be the same, glad I am not the hubbie.
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Anonymous03/17/08
This David character is not to be believed
first of all he makes the husband take a walk while he fuckes the wife and now he starts to smack her ass. Is he a sadist or something...maybe he is just a dufus that doesn't know how to fuck...Smacking the ass of a woman that has given you some good pussy...sounds weird to me...I would have knocked him on his ass but I guess mark sucks Davids cock in next chapter...RIGHT???marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
Something hot and steamy to read and fantasize about. Yes, the relationship won't the same. David seems a little contradictory...but thats why it's a story people. A good one at that. Just read it for the fantasy and eroticism part of it and STOP over analizing!
Great read GoldeniAngel....... You pulled me in; got my breath and pulse racing.
I have been a long time reader, and enjoy your offerings very much. I was afraid your pause in writing was going to be permanent. But, thankfully it was just a hiatus.
This is my first time to comment; I felt you needed some well deserved positive strokes. From your writings, I gather you make a great effort to create "real." You are very successful. By the way, I am so glad you have not done what many have lately, i.e. having the male gobble creampies, licking /eating cum, and/or focusing on condoms.
Most all of your writing makes me feel as if you have "been there, done that."
You are right there with remmittance girl, slyc willie, red haired and friendly, just plain bob,.....
English
Never going to be fine.
This is never going to be the same, glad I am not the hubbie.
This David character is not to be believed
first of all he makes the husband take a walk while he fuckes the wife and now he starts to smack her ass. Is he a sadist or something...maybe he is just a dufus that doesn't know how to fuck...Smacking the ass of a woman that has given you some good pussy...sounds weird to me...I would have knocked him on his ass but I guess mark sucks Davids cock in next chapter...RIGHT???marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
It's fiction
Something hot and steamy to read and fantasize about. Yes, the relationship won't the same. David seems a little contradictory...but thats why it's a story people. A good one at that. Just read it for the fantasy and eroticism part of it and STOP over analizing!
Great Story Goldeniangel
Great read GoldeniAngel....... You pulled me in; got my breath and pulse racing.
I have been a long time reader, and enjoy your offerings very much. I was afraid your pause in writing was going to be permanent. But, thankfully it was just a hiatus.
This is my first time to comment; I felt you needed some well deserved positive strokes. From your writings, I gather you make a great effort to create "real." You are very successful. By the way, I am so glad you have not done what many have lately, i.e. having the male gobble creampies, licking /eating cum, and/or focusing on condoms.
Most all of your writing makes me feel as if you have "been there, done that."
You are right there with remmittance girl, slyc willie, red haired and friendly, just plain bob,.....
I very much look forwad to your 2009.
An old cowboy, warrior, and admirer.....
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