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Great Start!
Great start towards, at least, a sequel, and, hopefully, a series. Would've liked it better, maybe even a 100 rating, if you had spent as more time on the waitresses "uniform". Being that she didn't "find" any panties, I was hopeing that she found some "discarded" pantyhose for "coverage" and more sex appeal to the story. I've seen a few truck stop "cuties" that were quite "fond" of pantyhose for beauty and "support". Well, maybe, you'll include that in the sequel!
Keep up the fine tuning
A good story well written with enough about each character to keep it interesting. Will wait for the sequel and hope you can keep up the good work.
Hot,..hot...hot
the temp around here rose as i read your writing, and while i never been with a woman before i have made friends with more then my share of truckers. very good and very much filling me with anticipation for the next installment
Loved it
Good butch dyke story - right up my alley; the sort I love best (you might like some of my stories too)
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