All Comments on 'Lynn's Journeys'

Great start! I hope that it's the beginning of a series. "We" can always use a storyline that's told with "Class & Just Enough Sass" to keep it sexy! Not overly fond of the use of the "F" word, but that's your choice to make. I would, however, like to see more "fashion" details, being a big fan of skirts and pantyhose! Otherwise, keep it up, I look forward to your next installment.

I say keep ALL of your words! You are the author and anybody that can write something readable can just do whatever they please! I love it when I can read a story that has a nice flow and that I am not stumbling over poor grammar. Thanks for sharing your work. Really.

Sexy as hell, left me wet just reading this seduction tale. can't wait to read the rest of it

I have to agree... wet as hell here too... more or less drenching.. i CANNOT wait to read the next installment... AWESOME JOB!!!!!

I rated this a 2, well maybe 2+ of 3-. I was flowing along with the story???? and then, What Story!. I was left all alone. You had better get the continuation moving soonest.

I know where you live and will hunt you down.

*feels a soft smile spreading over her face*

thank you ! what a great start! can't wait to continue reading.