All Comments on 'Cosmic Fate Ch. 01-04'

This is the most original story I have ever read on here. I absolutely loved the story line. I cant wait to hear more. Im hoping that the mother set it up to be "LI" PLEASE continue this story!!! I can also tell this was edited very well. Its a nice change to not have to do the editing in my head. I did find one spelling error but it wasnt enough to distract from this absolutely awesome story. MUCH THX

I liked the way you set up the main storie. I only hope that there are going to be more chapters. Looking forward to reading the next set and thank you for the great start.

stories about the future (2219) belong in the sci-fi/fantasy area no where else

DBRS