by tickledkitty
It’s on days like these - When I no longer need to wonder - if I am the only one who feels that longing, - The ache that only her touch can soothe. Thank you for putting it to words. Beautiful. - Chip
Just how lovely this is coming from you? It IS lovely, dearest friend. Just, heartfelt and present and glowing with tendons of strength and the ache of knowing Alone.
The poem is utterly beautiful, rich with feelings of desire and love lost in the rain, remembered and eroticized. C'est jolie.
the ache. I like the sameness yet differences in the stanzas. Heartfelt and intimate. Very touching. Well done!