All Comments on 'Kimberly Goes Vamp Ch. 4'

This is a good erotic series, though this 4th chapter had less tension and was less engaging than earlier chapters. However the spelling and punctuation are pretty rough: Melanie, not Melonie; extra space at quote marks; homophones their vs there, etc. An editor would help a lot. I have still enjoyed the work, but the errors are are very distracting. Keep writing, and let an editor help!

Are you going to continue Kimberly's tales????

Oh please tell me it's not over and there is at least one more chapter if not more I liking this too much.