Pleased to read you will be writing more. This was good but ended too abruptly just as it was starting to get going. I hope the grandson gets to incestuously fuck his grandma in the next chapter.
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Anonymous03/22/08
Take the plunge
I have looked at your other stories and I know you are interested in mother/son incest.There is nothing wrong with that.As far as this story is concerned, I would suggest you take the plunge and write a story with plenty of loving incest sex.Women seem to be very good at writing incest stories,I suppose its the Jocasta complex coming out,also whether they admit it or not most mothers are very possessive where thir sons are concerned,especially if he happens to be an only child.
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Anonymous03/22/08
Cum again!..
Some thought went into this story, I wonder how much of
the story is true. I found the story moving!.
Keep it UP !..
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Anonymous03/22/08
grandma
loved it ,just as it started to get good you stop. write some more. so i can finish dream it's me and my grandma and anut
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Anonymous03/22/08
Huh?
This goes from an 18 year old knowing nothing about sex, except what he read/saw in a magazine to eating his grandmother to climax in "sixty seconds or less"?
Very nice story, I enjoyed it but the boy should be like 15 or 16 because most 18 year old would stay on their own.
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Anonymous03/22/08
I liked it!
A little unrealistic on the premise, but now that you have them together, I hope you will tell us more.
by
Anonymous03/22/08
I Believe
That to write about a subject you need two things,a certain amount of knowledge of the subject matter and secondly to be able to think what will appeal to the reader.You have put a lot of thought into this but stop holding back ,let yourself go a write what you really feel
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Anonymous03/22/08
imagined it was YOU!
Oddly enough, the mental image I had, as I spanked and read, was not much different from the author's picture. Some cleavage would be nice, perhaps full topless!
I liked the story a lot, and really look forward to Aunt Fran getting some cock, as well as an FMF for the young man.
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Anonymous03/22/08
This Will
Get you going Jena,imagine its YOU instead of "Gran",bring in aunt and away you go with a sexual incestuous love in.
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Anonymous03/24/08
A Real Loving Grandson
What a nice story! Deserves a sequel and I look forward to more adventures of this boy and his sexy granny. Gran made a good start on their affair and there should be plenty more to come--or cum.
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Anonymous03/26/08
Nouns and verbs
Like many writers on Literotica you apparently don't know the difference between a noun and a verb.
"Cum" is a noun that refers to semen.
"Cumming" as a word does not exist. The correct word is the verb "To come" (Coming), in this case referring to an orgasm.
The story has a reasonable basic idea, but lacks any sublty in the telling.
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Anonymous03/26/08
LOVED IT
A GOOD INCEST STORY ABOUT A TEENAGER AND HIS GRAN,IT GOT ME CUMMMING,IT`S A SEXY WORD USED IN A SEXY EROTIC STORY---OBVIOUSLY ANONYMOUS IN U.S.A.IS NOT SEXY---I AM AND I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THE STORY--MORE PLEASE
HOW ABOUT YOU TRY AND WRITE A BETTER STORY - "CUMMING" IS A WORK THAT IS USED IN MOST EROTIC STORIES - IF YOU READ ANY OF THEM IN THIS PUBLICATION YOU WILL SEE THAT. IT IS USED AS MORE OF AN EXPRESSION OF FEELING. THANK YOU - JENA121
As a matter of fact I was DUX of the class for three years in English - so I think I know my nouns etc.
To Bamadude55 - maybe the boy is only 15/16 - unfortunately I have to say 18 as that is the legal age allowed on this site - just let your immagination run wild - Jena121
Poor sole in USA. does he know if hes cuming or going. Keep up the good work. I,m cumming
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Anonymous12/03/09
Good one!
I'm particularly fond of stories about older women, and this is one of the best. "Gram" was real...knew what she wanted, and confident she would get it. My kind of gal.
I really like stories about older women, especially grandmothers. This is one of the best. Great work Dee. Keep it up. Sure kept me up ... if you know what I mean.
English
Good but too short
Pleased to read you will be writing more. This was good but ended too abruptly just as it was starting to get going. I hope the grandson gets to incestuously fuck his grandma in the next chapter.
Take the plunge
I have looked at your other stories and I know you are interested in mother/son incest.There is nothing wrong with that.As far as this story is concerned, I would suggest you take the plunge and write a story with plenty of loving incest sex.Women seem to be very good at writing incest stories,I suppose its the Jocasta complex coming out,also whether they admit it or not most mothers are very possessive where thir sons are concerned,especially if he happens to be an only child.
Cum again!..
Some thought went into this story, I wonder how much of
the story is true. I found the story moving!.
Keep it UP !..
grandma
loved it ,just as it started to get good you stop. write some more. so i can finish dream it's me and my grandma and anut
Huh?
This goes from an 18 year old knowing nothing about sex, except what he read/saw in a magazine to eating his grandmother to climax in "sixty seconds or less"?
yeah, rriiiiiigggght!
NICE
Very nice story, I enjoyed it but the boy should be like 15 or 16 because most 18 year old would stay on their own.
I liked it!
A little unrealistic on the premise, but now that you have them together, I hope you will tell us more.
I Believe
That to write about a subject you need two things,a certain amount of knowledge of the subject matter and secondly to be able to think what will appeal to the reader.You have put a lot of thought into this but stop holding back ,let yourself go a write what you really feel
imagined it was YOU!
Oddly enough, the mental image I had, as I spanked and read, was not much different from the author's picture. Some cleavage would be nice, perhaps full topless!
I liked the story a lot, and really look forward to Aunt Fran getting some cock, as well as an FMF for the young man.
This Will
Get you going Jena,imagine its YOU instead of "Gran",bring in aunt and away you go with a sexual incestuous love in.
A Real Loving Grandson
What a nice story! Deserves a sequel and I look forward to more adventures of this boy and his sexy granny. Gran made a good start on their affair and there should be plenty more to come--or cum.
Nouns and verbs
Like many writers on Literotica you apparently don't know the difference between a noun and a verb.
"Cum" is a noun that refers to semen.
"Cumming" as a word does not exist. The correct word is the verb "To come" (Coming), in this case referring to an orgasm.
The story has a reasonable basic idea, but lacks any sublty in the telling.
LOVED IT
A GOOD INCEST STORY ABOUT A TEENAGER AND HIS GRAN,IT GOT ME CUMMMING,IT`S A SEXY WORD USED IN A SEXY EROTIC STORY---OBVIOUSLY ANONYMOUS IN U.S.A.IS NOT SEXY---I AM AND I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THE STORY--MORE PLEASE
To Anonymous in USA ........................
How about you writing a better story - "Cumming" is used in a lot of erotic writing.
ANONYMOUS OF AUSTRALIA
HOW ABOUT YOU TRY AND WRITE A BETTER STORY - "CUMMING" IS A WORK THAT IS USED IN MOST EROTIC STORIES - IF YOU READ ANY OF THEM IN THIS PUBLICATION YOU WILL SEE THAT. IT IS USED AS MORE OF AN EXPRESSION OF FEELING. THANK YOU - JENA121
As a matter of fact I was DUX of the class for three years in English - so I think I know my nouns etc.
Age???????????????????????????
To Bamadude55 - maybe the boy is only 15/16 - unfortunately I have to say 18 as that is the legal age allowed on this site - just let your immagination run wild - Jena121
Cum or cumming
Poor sole in USA. does he know if hes cuming or going. Keep up the good work. I,m cumming
Good one!
I'm particularly fond of stories about older women, and this is one of the best. "Gram" was real...knew what she wanted, and confident she would get it. My kind of gal.
Loved it!
I really like stories about older women, especially grandmothers. This is one of the best. Great work Dee. Keep it up. Sure kept me up ... if you know what I mean.
grans story
hmmm love older younger stories.
mmmmmmmmmm
Love to have gran come to my room.. wouldlick and suck her before sliding inside her sweet pussy
SO GOOOOOOD!
I have akways loved older ladies
and I am glad they are not bashfull
about having their needs met.
This is a truley delightfull story about a
young man and his granny and I really
enjoyed reading it and look forward to
her Gran's story Ch 2,3and 4
Thanks Jena You are a "Sweetie'
Sensitive,
lusty and brief. Well written, almost believable.
derivative
its a good story, having read all the chapters but the whole grandmother missing the long dead grandfather thing is done to death
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