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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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An unexpected way the subject was treated, though you may want to do a bit of editing on something that slipped by you, "from nicking my myself."<br>

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Those last two lines are strongest, carrying so many possible meanings to think on.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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the last two lines are cliched, menstruation angel, now that's a line, feather is needlessly duplicated. Sorry about your defoliation. It'll grow back, bushey as ever.

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