All Comments on 'Eva Down Under Ch. 02'

Im really enjoying this story Dawn! The characters are wonderful, the idea is brilliant! Your writing is very very good. Only one or two areas in both chapters where it seems a little rushed, but that is only a matter of adding a few words to keep it flowing (and all writers are guilty of it lol). This is a very good story, Keep going!

you have the knack of making me read while my throat gets dry, while i feel happy for you people.

I'm believing she's ready to contemplate a change of her life location? :+))