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Good beginning
good start
Definite improvement
You can tell by my score
short
good start, although rather short.. I hope the next chapter is a little longer.. Keep going.
Excellent beginning--a tease like your story!
A good beginning, leaving me looking forward to what cums next (or not), trying to ignore MY erection. I love a good, desperate tease...
Please...
Please write more to this story!! I loved the open to this story, but when you put ch.1, that means that there is gonna be at least a ch.2. The first chapter was short (but great) and I can't wait to read chapter 2. PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE TO THIS STORY!!!!
Ahhhh
FINISH THE STORY! It started out amazingly
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