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The End?????
Way too much left to write about. A Chapter 2 is definitely need maybe even Chapters 3, 4 & more. Very nice beginning.
The End?????
Way too much left to write about. A Chapter 2 is definitely need maybe even Chapters 3, 4 & more. Very nice beginning.
No way!
The *perfect* place to end it. The rest is in the reader's imagination.
This story must continue!
I am so hard it is unbelievable!Do not end this story! Amanda and Jess need to each give him a blojob! And while they're on vacation the dad needs to have sex with all 3! You could write so much more. Amanda could even have more sorority sisters that her father could have sex with as well. Please, please continue this story! The possibilities are endless!
ending
very good starting i hope to see the next chapter soon i think the ending is great
Great, but
is he the reluctant one? Very erotic, very nicely written, could be the beginning of a series of a Destin vacation as others have commented. Hope so see more. BTW can he cum at least three times in 16 hours? I hope so.
and then...
need to continue this one for sure! hurry!
Wayward Dad
Oh, the directions this could go! . . .
Steph does the same thing to Jess' beautifulf breasts, again, while "sleeping", then a slow make-out session in the back seat, and of course watching this causes things to pop-up. Can't help myself need another quickie, daughter obliges. OR . . .
Nothing happens in car, but when they stop for the night because of 'car trouble" . . .???
Next Chapter
Five Days Later
Where's the follow up? soon it will be to late for readers to make the connection.
More!
Where is part 2? I want to hear the rest pretty badly.
One of the best stories on this site!
This story would make a great series and I hope it is continued! The Dad could really have his hands full with his daughter and her two friends. Would be even better if when they arrive at Destin more of Amanda's friends are there to keep the Dad busy!
Incredible!
Unlike anything I have read in a long time. VERY erotic! I really enjoyed it, but one thing bothered me. "Mexican" decribes a person's nation of citizenship. It is not a race or ethnicity, therefore, a person cannot "look Mexican." Otherwise, very good!
Damn...
Sweet build up, Loved this one. what happened next???????????????
Dont quit now!
Please write more!
What a great story! Please write more chapters!
Fantastic Story
Please write MORE MORE MORE!!!
good stuff
Not bad at all. Glad she was I on it. Made it a little more realistic. Can't wait for sequel.
hope to see a sequel
no t sure at first but really enjoyed it. I hope you will continue trip in a sequel to this one. As you have caught my attension with this one and now look forward to the next part of the trip great work.
Great story but why do you never finish the story line
Great story but why do you never finish the story line
excellent ..
love the sleeping bj storyline :) very well done :)
Well-Written
Very easy to suspend the disbelief here. Well paced and extremely arousing. Well done!
One of my favourites.
I have read this story so many times and would love to see another chapter.
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