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by Anonymous03/24/08

Not bad

Very nice to read honest accounts of early sexual experiences, ones that aren't full of overstatement and mere fantasy, but this one wasn't particularly arousing. Hopefully next time you can involve your readers with descriptive sex and resist so much of the first person trivial details. This is meant constructively, FYI.

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