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by KOLKORE03/19/08

True romance in three lines

My favorites are one two and six, where the third and climactic line (achieved by the contrast of meaning to the first two lines) worked best for me. The best about such a selection: each will find their favorites, even better-all.

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by dominateme103/20/08

I loved it!

I loved it! It told a story yet each can be read seperately.

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