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That is a very dark, and disturbing piece of prose. I can only hope that as the time passed between now and when you wrote it, you were able to exorcise whatever prompted you to feel like this. It is very nicely done from a technical stand point. Graphic and moving.
Nicely written
Would you be so kind as to give us another
cut of the piece?
Very good
Dark and disturbing and oh so well written. Good one!
Deep and moving
Extremely well written catching the invisible scars and pain that people can not see from the outside. I hope the writing of this exorcised some of the demons.
WTF
Too obtuse
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