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Diane the Sex Slave Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/26/08

She can walk at any time it just takes

some sort of morals and ethics, and a very strong backbone. You have painted her as a neurotic, unthinking, wimp of immature girl.

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by Robert_Not03/26/08

Realistic Description

@ Anonymous:
I know how easy it is to start on the slippery slope to not being able to take the opportunities available and becoming embarassed about this. For me it adds to the excitement that she remains.

@Sylvia:
I liked the story - it's building up to a nice bit of depravity. However, I hope you manage to find a way to build in a bit more detail about the story leading up to their seperation, so we can see how she came to land in this situation.
Looking forward to Ch3!
R.

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by jbusy8608/04/11

feet

i jack off so many times to dis how did you come up with dis marareen is a trip is she just getting diane back or really a secret lesbain

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