All Comments on 'The Babysitter's Secret Ch. 02'

i cummed all over my crossdresser self when i read this

i love to be penetrated and i hope i get a transsexual like Jenny

One of the best transexual/family/love stories i have ever read.It was full of erotic moments and it seemed so real. No one had a nine inch dick or huge tits, just ordinary and loving people having a sexually gratifying time. Please continue with this sexually charged story.

this was a great description of one of my most enjoyed fantasies...i can't wait until the family threesome happens and the girls both show him what he's missing.....maybe even a double penetration for hubby :) ....was really super hot for me...you did a great job and i'm patiently waiting for chapter 3

Another super sexy story from my favourite writer!! A big FAN here of all your stories. It's been such a long time.. Thank you.. Can't wait for the continuation of the sister's secret!

Thank you!

I'm soooo happy for a new story and even better, a continuation! I'll be checking in for the next chapter.

I'm pleased that you have returned and continued submitting your work to Literotica. I really enjoy reading all your stories and hope you will finish Sisters' Secret. Keep up the good work.

It's about damn time! Glad to see you're back and writing again. Great continuation to this story, and I'm looking forward to the third installment!

You have written such a tender and passionate story of sexual awakenings. I can honestly say that I can relate to the characters especially Jennny. I hoe that you will continue to write fantastic love stories like this. I give this story three tissue boxes up!

I know quality takes time, but I sincerely hope you are working on the continuing story of Jenny, and or any of your other TS series - they're the best I've read on this site, or elsewhere for that matter! Thanks for writing them all!

I loved this story, and I love this series. I'm eagerly awaiting the 3rd installment!!!

great imagery and action. I love writing on this subject too. Fun!

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. You are a terffic writer. I loved the story, it touched on three of my biggest fantasies, ladyboys and babysitters.

Please continue the series.. there are so many great ways this could go with the wife, husband and babysitter.

Bravo, more please

I have enjoyed this series a lot, and I hope you have the chance to revisit it soon.

I love the visuals and the caring characters. There is so much more to sex that just fucking and you manage to capture that.

Brookell

I felt the entire story. Great. You should write another few dozen

I read chapter 1 and chapter 2. When I saw that chapter 2 was about a ts on f, I was a little put off but as I continued reading, I have to say that this was the better chapter.

Hot story. We need more more more

This is am amazing story,

What a unique & beautiful relationship these 3 are going to have,

There has to be Ch3 where jenny fucks Peter.

More more

It is so horny, oh to have the opertunity to be with am 18yr old Tgirl

I didn't think the story could get any better and then it went supernova WOW... I hope there will be many more chapters your characters are so well rounded and involved with eachother..

The three of them have so many adventures ahead of them. What the heck, invite friends and have an unexpected orgy....

Incredible writing. Keep writing

I read both chapters and I think the story is awesome. Your characters are well developed and it is a very smooth read. I am really looking forward to hearing more about the relationship as it develops.

Dave

great story and ill be wating to hear more of there adventures iam sure it will get much hotter xxxxx

great story just so sexy think i want to join this party and cant wait for part three

I have always been bisexual since early childhood I had always wanted to wear the pretty little dresses the girls in the neighborhood wore, my mother sewed most of my older sisters things and I always was bugging her to make me something with the pretty pinks, lavender or violet colors but for the most part she would not do that. I love eating pussy, I love sucking cock and swallowing cum, I enjoy licking the cute little butt holes of my partners, and to this day the use of vaseline has always made my 7 1/2 inch cock rise up and wanting me to jackoff with it. I hope there will be more of this story later.

Tender and erotic, and utterly arousing. Great storytelling filled with the valleys and crescendos of great sex! I love it ... and thank you.

I love your writing. It tells a great story along with a fantastic sexual description.

if you don't write a part 3, i just might...

You are a motherfucking asshole also nice story

write a chapter three, please!

need more soon I loved the story

i love this story there needs to be a chapter 3 please don't leave us hanging

i cant wait for more. this story is my dream......i only wish my husband and I could find a Jenny. thanks for some lovely climaxes.

I liked the first one better... But this is pretty good too...

A little disapointed in the fact that his wife and jenny wouldn't let him join in.After all she already slept with her co-worker.It wasn't like he got to sleep with hers,That said Fantastic story! Please another chapter?Maybe have them both service him as an apology for cock blocking him.

A great follow up, only real flaw is that you didn´t tell us about a threesome. Well you kinda did but I hope that comes in the next chapter if you write one. Write one!

there is much to tell and experience. It's only the beginning. Well done and please write fast. Lots of us are anxious...............

Wow this has to happen to me in real life

I disagree this was as hot if not hotter than the first. Can't wait till Chapter 3 when the threesome begins?

Pictures would have made this a more perfect story!! Yum yum!

this one should be a movie . can't wait to see the next installment

Every girls dream.

You have created a story that should last for many, many more chapters including all sorts of playful, seductive, and orgasmic results. Looking forward your amazing writing talents.

It was absolutely delicious! I hope you start writing again!

what happen to chapter 3

So awesome, I could feel the love

Awesome read, hope to read chapter 3 sometime soon

So well written again.

Great story and looking forward to chapter three.

One little screw-up with Jenny already having removed her shirt and bra and having Shawna ravish her tits before Jenny climbed up on the bed and then Shawna removing them again later.

Other than that, it was hot. Can't wait to read about the inevitable threesome!

Can't wait for a follow up.

It doesn't make sense that shawna would use a dildo if peter is downstairs. It seems really redundant. A bit of a waste really. What was the point of telling peter that this has to be between the two of them if the babysitters still gonna take it up the ass? That seemed pointless. Also the fact that both of them are cheating on eachother sounds like they should just get a divorce. Nothing about this story made sense to me.

The virgin ass should have been saved for her HUSBAND.....dumb bitch, lol

bill.....5sssss

hot hot hot

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

So hot and so well written!

Jenny needs to be the next one to knock up Shawna!

yes i reckon jenny should knock up shawna !

as much as there are some"nice" parts of this story, cheating is still cheating!

I would love to see another chapter

Very Hot.

Yeah. Its always a bout the woman, now that Shawna and Jenny have had their marathon romp in the sack neither woman actually needs Peter. With Shawna letting Jenny fuck her with no protection I can only contemplate Shawna getting pregnant by Jenny.

Well written, so much for their proclaimed love for hubby. Happy that they found what they really needed from each other. Not much point in reading anymore because all that remains is the mercy threesome for hubby & contempt that follows

I enjoyed your story since i have fantasized about having a threesome with a transgender person.

Both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 in this are AMAZING, and I soooo hope you do more with this storyline !!!

Evidently, your characters so enjoyed removing young Jenna's blouse and bra, they did it twice. lol

You wrote:

"...pushing the blouse away, letting it fall to the floor... Jenny reached behind her back and unclasped the white bra she was wearing."

Then, a few paragraphs later, you wrote:

"The girl removed herself from the woman's breasts long enough for Shawna to pull the blouse off over her head. ...Jenny's breasts through the white fabric of her bra... ...before reaching behind the girl's back and unclasping it."

Oops...

Very good

I hope you do write a chapter 3, the wife and Jenny getting closer, The husband and Jenny, the husband and wife getting closer. Finally the 3 of them getting closer. Maybe Jenny fucking the husband.

You also have a 3 way spitroasting party too...LOL

I enjoyed it

Thank You

That would be the Taj Mahal then.

Or was she sighing at the beautiful sight?

Please continue with this story, I love the way you write!

It was Awesome .. I have had sex with a he she n i was dressed up in my sexy blk lace panties blk lace bustier stockings n blk strappy heel..we kicked back on my bed ewtching a porno bnext thing i rubbing her buldge thebi started to pull her shorts down revealing a nice sexy blk cock..i went crazy ..attacking it till it was hard n she told me to get on my hands n knees n slid her 9 inch cock in my ass ..oh goodbit felt great ..

I have always fantized about bieng with a man but this blew my mind..

You so need to carry on with this story. I have just found both chapters today and would love to know what happens.

Deliciously sensual and oh so naughty pleasures

WOW! I hope that somedya, I meet someone like Jenny>

I always wanted to f*** and be f***** lovingly by a tranny.

When will the sequel come? 3.Can't wait for the story

Your story is so hot and took so much cum from my body. I loved it!!

Ready for chapter 3! Hope both girls take peters ass and jenny moves in and they all have a baby together.