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All Comments on 'The Sting of the Rain'

by MagicaPractica

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
As Long

Its a clean bum with full cheeks lovely,Magica well and truly on form.

RoorniRoorniabout 16 years ago
Nice...

but too short, would love to see you keep this one going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
one can hope

that this is the start of a very hot

relationship.she bared her body&soul,he

answered with his mind&body.i really liked

the feel of this story.a winner!

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
An excellent story...

I read all of your stories except the Essays (at least as far down as this one). I liked them all but would have liked them to be about 50% longer. I realize that this one was supposed to be short so not speaking of this one. Thank you for writing.

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I'm a passionate, married, BBW looking for an outlet for my writing. I've written quite a few stories of varying degrees of quality over all the categories. I hope you find something you like.