but too short, would love to see you keep this one going.
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Anonymous09/02/08
one can hope
that this is the start of a very hot
relationship.she bared her body&soul,he
answered with his mind&body.i really liked
the feel of this story.a winner!
I read all of your stories except the Essays (at least as far down as this one). I liked them all but would have liked them to be about 50% longer. I realize that this one was supposed to be short so not speaking of this one. Thank you for writing.
English
As Long
Its a clean bum with full cheeks lovely,Magica well and truly on form.
Nice...
but too short, would love to see you keep this one going.
one can hope
that this is the start of a very hot
relationship.she bared her body&soul,he
answered with his mind&body.i really liked
the feel of this story.a winner!
An excellent story...
I read all of your stories except the Essays (at least as far down as this one). I liked them all but would have liked them to be about 50% longer. I realize that this one was supposed to be short so not speaking of this one. Thank you for writing.
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