I have only just commented on this story, having saved myself for the end. May I complement you on such a superbly written tale. Well Done and Thank you
It is also one of my favorite stories. This must be the 5th time I've read this story and it never gets old. I hope I find my Luke and I'm happy that Becks found hers after that tosser Daniel.
GREAT STORY
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Anonymous04/12/13
Great story - you have real talent - can't wait to read your other stories
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Anonymous04/12/13
Wonderful story!
It never gets old. I keep coming back to read it whenever I need a dose of romance. I love it!
I love how every time I come back I'm able to give it 5 stars again!
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Anonymous05/09/13
Just WOW!
The best ever! Loved it :D
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Anonymous05/24/13
Have read 2 of your stories now - both very sweet and romantic. Will keep reading. Hope I can find some where the girl doesn't sleep with the guy within hours of meeting him - however you sugarcoat it, that's pretty slutty.
I've read this story twice now, I just love this story!!! I hope you keep writing stories, I've read all of the ones you have and I've loved them all, but this one by far is my absolute favorite, amazing job!!!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING!! What a beautiful story! Such well developed characters! I'm glad I got to read it in its entirety. It would have been so hard to wait between chapters! Keep writing. You have a WONDERFUL Gift!!
I couldn't read this fast enough. I was totally absorbed in this story. Evanslily is beyond talented. Totally awesome story. Just a few epilogue additions you may consider: What happened to Daniel, Janine and the child? Thank you so much!
Lily, I just want to say how much I enjoyed this story. For that matter all your stories. You have such a well-crafted writing style, with well-rounded characters in believable situations.
I hope you have the opportunity to continue writing and I will be checking out your ebook offerings.
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Anonymous04/09/14
Thank you so much for writing this!
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Anonymous04/13/14
Just Perfect
No mater what life brings you, please keep writing.
I have been up allll night reading this. You are undoubtably one of the best, if THE best author here! You are incredibly talented, and I'm so very jealous of your gift.
Thank you for inviting us into Luke and Becks world.
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Anonymous09/03/14
good story
But the end wasn't how i'd expected it to be. I mean you're a really great writer and i honestly loved this story but i don't know....the ending was kinda weak compared to the start. But all in all a great story, you're a very good writer
Out of all 3 that I read in the span of two nights, this one was my favorite. Thanks for writing it!
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Anonymous05/01/15
Super!
Lovely story and a huge bonus on this site - proper grammar & punctuation.
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Anonymous09/07/15
I keep coming back...
And rereading your stories. So much fun. I hope you keep writing and posting!!
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Anonymous11/17/15
I suddenly realized...
I loved - and have read and re-read - your stories for a long time. Then it finally became clear to me that your heroines are whiny, helpless, uninteresting, weak women in need of rescuing. It hit me when Luke told her she was amazing, I wondered why. What is amazing about her? What is he in love with? I have no idea. She exhibits no particular traits that are admirable - the only thing she does is faint and need constant reassurance and help. Yuck. What an awful depiction of women.
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Anonymous01/03/16
@previous anon, then why the fuck did you read it over and over and over you tosser!
If Daniel wanted mum dead why get her to the hospital. Already knew he was getting 10%
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Anonymous06/18/16
Wow, totally agree with you anonymous
I wasn't going to comment but after seeing the comment that's from another anonymous person down below I can't not say anything. I totally agree with them, I just read this story again and I don't know why tosser foster loves this women. I thought this was a good read a long time ago but now... now she just annoys the crap out of me. All she does is bitch, faint and cry this whole story. How did I miss that my first time through? Other then the sex what does he get out of this relationship? A weak woman that always needs reassurance? Sad way to portray women in my opinion, you will see this is a common theme in there other stories as well. How did I miss this? I like your leading male characters, but the women.... not so much.
How is a person supposed to act when they were hours away from marrying somebody and find out that they were cheated on? It's not a happy thing to find out. I know from personal experience about being cheated on, it's not a laughing matter. At the end of the story she's not the whiny woman from the start. She shows true fire when she confronts the ex. That is the woman's true self. Think about the situation and take that into account.
Brilliant absolutely brilliant
I have only just commented on this story, having saved myself for the end. May I complement you on such a superbly written tale. Well Done and Thank you
back again
This is still the best story on lit as far as im concerned :)
Best. Nuffsed
Ditto--this is one of the best stories on Lit
It is also one of my favorite stories. This must be the 5th time I've read this story and it never gets old. I hope I find my Luke and I'm happy that Becks found hers after that tosser Daniel.
GREAT STORY
Great story - you have real talent - can't wait to read your other stories
Wonderful story!
It never gets old. I keep coming back to read it whenever I need a dose of romance. I love it!
Voting
I love how every time I come back I'm able to give it 5 stars again!
Just WOW!
The best ever! Loved it :D
Have read 2 of your stories now - both very sweet and romantic. Will keep reading. Hope I can find some where the girl doesn't sleep with the guy within hours of meeting him - however you sugarcoat it, that's pretty slutty.
I've read this story twice now, I just love this story!!! I hope you keep writing stories, I've read all of the ones you have and I've loved them all, but this one by far is my absolute favorite, amazing job!!!
Simply Wonderful!
One of the BEST stories on here! Loved it!
Thank YOU!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING!! What a beautiful story! Such well developed characters! I'm glad I got to read it in its entirety. It would have been so hard to wait between chapters! Keep writing. You have a WONDERFUL Gift!!
what
is ttthis 1*
Loved this the first time i read it
And loved it even more this time :)
Beautiful
I loved this story! Thank you!!!
Favorite author!
I love your stories! 😘
Wonderful
Thank you! This was such a sweet, genuine and still sexy love story.
Loved it!
Thanks for a wonderful love story with a happy ending!!!
So was she or wasn't she pregnant at the wedding? Luke said "not have a bun in the oven" but then implied that she did.
Great story
I could not stop and until I read it all
Awesome
couldn't stop reading
I am now only going to get three hours of sleep because I got so hooked and had to read the entire story.
Randomly, I also always get sleepy in mercedes benzes and I found out my mom does too. I think it's something to do with their design.
Totally engaging drama; very addictive.
I couldn't read this fast enough. I was totally absorbed in this story. Evanslily is beyond talented. Totally awesome story. Just a few epilogue additions you may consider: What happened to Daniel, Janine and the child? Thank you so much!
enjoyable read
Lily, I just want to say how much I enjoyed this story. For that matter all your stories. You have such a well-crafted writing style, with well-rounded characters in believable situations.
I hope you have the opportunity to continue writing and I will be checking out your ebook offerings.
Thank you so much for writing this!
Just Perfect
No mater what life brings you, please keep writing.
I don't know ...
... if you still read comments, but here goes!
I have been up allll night reading this. You are undoubtably one of the best, if THE best author here! You are incredibly talented, and I'm so very jealous of your gift.
Thank you for inviting us into Luke and Becks world.
good story
But the end wasn't how i'd expected it to be. I mean you're a really great writer and i honestly loved this story but i don't know....the ending was kinda weak compared to the start. But all in all a great story, you're a very good writer
wonderful...
work - congratulations - and thanks!
best story of your writings
Out of all 3 that I read in the span of two nights, this one was my favorite. Thanks for writing it!
Super!
Lovely story and a huge bonus on this site - proper grammar & punctuation.
I keep coming back...
And rereading your stories. So much fun. I hope you keep writing and posting!!
I suddenly realized...
I loved - and have read and re-read - your stories for a long time. Then it finally became clear to me that your heroines are whiny, helpless, uninteresting, weak women in need of rescuing. It hit me when Luke told her she was amazing, I wondered why. What is amazing about her? What is he in love with? I have no idea. She exhibits no particular traits that are admirable - the only thing she does is faint and need constant reassurance and help. Yuck. What an awful depiction of women.
@previous anon, then why the fuck did you read it over and over and over you tosser!
Loved it!
Everything about this story was perfect! Thank you :)
Fatal flaw
If Daniel wanted mum dead why get her to the hospital. Already knew he was getting 10%
Wow, totally agree with you anonymous
I wasn't going to comment but after seeing the comment that's from another anonymous person down below I can't not say anything. I totally agree with them, I just read this story again and I don't know why tosser foster loves this women. I thought this was a good read a long time ago but now... now she just annoys the crap out of me. All she does is bitch, faint and cry this whole story. How did I miss that my first time through? Other then the sex what does he get out of this relationship? A weak woman that always needs reassurance? Sad way to portray women in my opinion, you will see this is a common theme in there other stories as well. How did I miss this? I like your leading male characters, but the women.... not so much.
The 2 anons
How is a person supposed to act when they were hours away from marrying somebody and find out that they were cheated on? It's not a happy thing to find out. I know from personal experience about being cheated on, it's not a laughing matter. At the end of the story she's not the whiny woman from the start. She shows true fire when she confronts the ex. That is the woman's true self. Think about the situation and take that into account.
Love this story !
Omg you found my dream guy ...Dr.Foster .. ;)
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