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Caught by the Tide Ch. 10

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by PrincessErin03/29/08

Thank You

Thank you for finally finishing this story. I truly enjoyed it and I'm so happy for the ending. Can't wait to read more.

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by Anonymous03/29/08

evanslily you rock !!

I love your work - thanks for a great read !!

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by Anonymous03/29/08

awww

i'm happy and sad it's over. Happy cause it's a fantastic story. And sad cause it's a fantastic story...and I didn't want it to end.

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by Anonymous03/29/08

the most wonderful story!!!

Please keep on writing!You are my absolute favourite writer!!!!

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by cageytee03/29/08

As with all of your other work . . .

this was well worth waiting for. Although there is, I am sure, a strong sense of satisfaction in having finished it, I trust the challenge of continuing with your storytelling is alive and well and living inside you, just waiting for the catalyst to get a new tale started. This old man will be waiting, anxiously, to see what that fertile mind of yours produces next. Thank you for all the time, energy and prodigious talent you put in to entertaining your readers.

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by Anonymous03/29/08

Thank you!

What a delightful story! While I am sorry to see it come to its inevitable conclusion, I think you did a wonderful job. (Having said that, I'm going to hold onto the slim hope that perhaps someday we will get to revisit Luke and Becks.) In the meantime, the farm and its enchantments await....

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by Anonymous03/29/08

amazingg

i loved it
now sit your ass back down and finish writing back to the farm:D

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by michchick9803/29/08

Bravo!

I'm almost sorry to see this end. You really did make us hate Daniel. I would've loved to have seen what Becca's mom did to him when she found out about what he'd been planning.

Anyway, this was a wonderful ending to an equally wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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by Hikergirl03/29/08

Congrats...

...on a great story!You've made quite a name for yourself in the short time you've been posting here, and justifiably so. I hope you continue!

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by Nyasia03/29/08

White Sands...

It's fitting that Luke and Becks would get married there. After all, that's where the tide caught them. The only thing that disappointed me was that we didn't learn how "Baby Tosser Foster" came into being. After all, Becks took her contraceptives quite seriously and missing one tablet usually doesn't result in pregnancy as long as the remaining course is taken. I think that the backstory on that would have been a fun read...and, hot, too! I'm going to miss Luke and Becks...well done, Lily!

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by PrettiPrincess03/29/08

One of my FAVORITE stories of all time!

ooh! i love this story!!! what a great ending. it's sad that it's over, but i'm glad i could read such a heart-warming story. i can't wait for you to finish matt and lissy's story too! please keep writing, you have a great talent.

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by Tricialen03/29/08

Wonderful

and romantic, you created the perfect hero, not too alpha, not too nerdy, just right. and Becks fits him perfectly.

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by Anonymous03/29/08

simply...

marvelous! What a great ending to an utterly delightful story. In some stories, beginning & middle parts are good but the ending disappoints. I'm glad to note that this is definitely not the case. Great dialogue all throughout; loved the part about not 'losing the bacon sandwich'. LOL Congratulations on a job well done. Good luck, and hope to read Back to the Farm soon!

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by bruce2203/29/08

A Great Pleasure

to read this fine story. Luke was really an amusing figure and Daniel was a terrible villain! Sorry to see it over with!

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by MollyDolly03/29/08

Beautiful!

I love your work and I love, love, love this story! *sigh* Where's my Luke? He doesn't have to be a hunky doctor- I'm not quite that picky :) Thank you for finishing it off :)

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by Anonymous03/29/08

To my favourite author

I have yet to read anything that you have written that I don't love; I'm looking forward to the end of BTTF.

Shh! You know who.

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by starry_night03/29/08

Thank you!

I really enjoyed reading this story! It's romantic and funny with such charming characters. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this lovely story!

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by Anonymous03/30/08

thank you

i loved this story. the perfect ending. can't wait to read more from you!!

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by sharona03/30/08

YES!

Absolutely awesome ending to a fantastic story! Thanks so much for the wonderful characters you let us get to know. Take Care!

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by NorCalGirl03/30/08

A wonderful read

You had me fooled, thinking perhaps Becks was going to be pregnant from the prior chapter. A truly fun and sexy read! Like someone else already said, I'd love to find a Luke of my own, and he doesn't need to be a high-powered doctor either.

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by Anonymous03/30/08

great

you are simply gr8

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by Anonymous03/30/08

Thank you!

This story was so enjoyable and romantic.

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by Anonymous03/30/08

awesome!

Loved this story...sad its over but i hope you can work on Back to the Farm now...both of these stories anr my favorites...cant wait for the next chapters you such a great writer!

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by kittykat3603/30/08

AWESOME

I loved every bit of this story. I am so glad to see the last chapter so soon, but I am sad that it is over. Can't wait for you to finish the other story. You are a great writer. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

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by Anonymous03/30/08

Love it!

Awww that was such a cute story! I love it! Cant wait to read the rest of your stories! Thanks!

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by smidgeon03/30/08

Bliss

That was a great wrap up to a wonderful story... I don't think you could have done any nicer. As solid and attractive as Luke is, Daniel is equally (or worse) pathetic and disgusting. It was definitely a love/hate relationship throughout the story. But ultimately, we're left with the wonderfully warm images of Luke ... and the tart he married. :-)

Thanks for sharing the story, and I look forward to reading more from you!

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by GracieLauren03/30/08

Wonderful

This was one of the best stories I've read on this site. Realistic, wonderfully told and beutifully narrated. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of your work and I hope you plan on writing much more.

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by Anonymous03/30/08

absolutely delightful!

This story is absolutely delightful! (I have a few minor complaints, here and there; I've mentioned those.) But at various points across the ten chapters, the story was very touching or very humorous; sometimes both. Again, absolutely delightful.
-- KK in Texas

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by August_Bouvier03/30/08

Bittersweet

It's like an amazing ride that you know has to end, and when it does you're not quite sure you want to get off. Um, pardon the pun.
You made me care for these characters. I liked that you gave Becks and Luke a year together before getting married. They started with such a whirlwind and it's satisfying to me to know they have a solid foundation as they continue their adventure.I enjoyed your twist on the Foster tradition.
Well done! Good luck with your exams and hope to see you soon on The Farm.

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Great Story

This was so good I had to start over so I could read the whole thing through to the end. It was a great story with lovely twist and turns, while staying true to the story of those two. Great Work now I have to go read your others!

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by Anonymous03/30/08

Exceptional Talent Makes A Superb story

This One's Really Really Extraordinary.

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by Anonymous03/31/08

Sexy, Romantic Read

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this awesome story, it was completely worth the wait! I hope you'll continue to write and post in the future!

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by Roge472xal03/31/08

Perfect!

A great story, in the end not too convoluted, yet with brilliant kinks, hitches and touches of humour. Well worth the wait for the conclusion; and that goes for the anticipation of the writing yet to come! :-) Roger

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by Anonymous03/31/08

Terriffic Story!!!

Have enjoyed it from beginning to end. Great way to bring it to conclusion. Can't wait for completion of "Back to the Farm". Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous04/02/08

*yay*

That was lovely :)

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by PrettiPrincess04/02/08

I love this story!

Can you please hurry and put up the next chapter to matt and lissy's story?

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by Xriah04/06/08

Awww I loved the ending ^_^

It was cute. You're an amazing author and I can't wait to read more on your farm story as well.

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by Anonymous04/16/08

inspired

brilliant.romantic unexpected and not smutty you really are very talented :)

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by Anonymous04/24/08

Perfect!

I was late to work this morning because once i started reading your story i couldn't stop until the end, and what an ending!!! Such a great read, keep up the good work :)

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by pookerts06/02/08

2nd time around

This is my second time reading this story, it's really fantastic....keep writing :)

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by Anonymous06/16/08

The best!

I loved this story. I laughed, I cried. I even yelled when Daniel finally got what was coming to him because I was SO happy! You are a wonderful writer. Don't stop. Ever.

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by IAN_T07/18/08

Brill!!!!!

Excellent!!
Don't need to say anymore.
Thanks

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by sacrificedangel08/01/08

Excellent!!

..Ive only just gotten around to reading that, and I LOVED it!!! What a fabulous story!

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by Anonymous08/10/08

best story ever!

wow.................

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by Anonymous08/12/08

you are sensational!

amazing amazing amazing!!!!! i absolutely love ALL your stories, you are no doubt talented and extremely creative. you make me want to know luke and becks for life, i dont' even want his story to end! thank you so much for this wonderful story!

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by Anonymous08/23/08

Things that make you go 'ohh'!

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! So sweet. Had a big smile on my face when I finished it. Good Job!

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by Dancewithme209/08/08

How?

How can anyone possibly find fault with anything in this wonderful story? It was a great read, and all the time and effort it took to write it paid off. Seems like everyone loved it. Congratulations lily! It was great. :-)

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by Anonymous09/15/08

hmm

this story was fantastic!!!

just one thing i realised.. what does Becks do?? i could have it wasnt mentioned what she does???

:)

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by Anonymous10/10/08

Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Such a wonderful story--loved the characters. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

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by Anonymous11/10/08

Wow, Fabulous!

This story was amazing! Romantic and exciting... So well-written!

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