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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz03/28/08

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Quite a litany of sins you've listed here, some sounding more appealing than others.

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by swallowedscream03/31/08

So true!

I love the flow of this, it just begs to be read aloud.

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by lorencino09/22/08

Surfing in the real


What a pleasant experience reading this poem was. I had to go back and do it again immediately. There is a groovy beat that carries you through all those clearly defined acts of satiation that opens one to allowing the seducer free rein for their satiation.

I love how perceptive you are about the nature of reality.

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