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by Anonymous

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by GToast04/05/08

Perfunctory

Nicely written, and characters I cared about; but it really needed to go a bit more slowly, to have some development, some buildup. It was over too soon.Well, better to have too little of a good thing than too much of a bad thing. Keep writing, and maybe consult with an editor.

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by hathorbr107/26/10

Sweet, very sweet!

I really liked this story a lot. Great Job!

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