All Comments on 'Nat and Sandy Pay the Rent Ch. 02'

a woman hating piece of crap

I like sex a lot, but only with full consenting partners. yes, I know, they both knew what was up, but being fucked cruelly and molested is something different. I don't know if you finished this story already or are waiting for input from the readers, but I hope that young Ryan can secure the pictures/film from Alan and exposes the rapists for what they are, rich lower than low pricks who think that money allows them to do just anything. Sorry, I don't like this kind of stories and sincerely hope that right will be done.

G.Belgium

Not sure why people come in to the Nonconsent FANTASY area if they don't like that genre of erotica.

For my taste this moved fairly quickly and I would like more of a peek inside the characters' heads and more of a sense of the dilemma that Sandy is experiencing. But I do like the situation; consent but not willingly.

(I know, some wire came loose while I was very, very young and places like this are the places to explore that, not real life)

this is NOT everyone's taste, it's a great story for those who like this kind of fantasy . . . If the readers don't like non-consent stories why'd they read it . . . forget the naysayers and keep writing!

Why on earth do morons come into the non-consent section and then bash the stories for being non-consent? I like my erotica rough and violent. If others don't, then why on earth are they reading from this section? Great story Jaymal.

Oh what to say...um... ouch would be a fine place to start. ( lol )I'm glad this chapter was much shorter than the first. It really made me feel for the girls. (Ow! Talk about bastadry and buggery at its most evil.) So dirty, yet still fucking hot. (Although, I would have demanded a cool $700 an hour...and not $1500 a night. But hey, this is fiction.) I guess Nat and poor Sandy's experience can't get any worse... or can it? Oh dear...I'll have to brave it and finish the read. Nice one J :)

Great story, a real classic!

dropping the girl on dick while doing anal the very first time

how come her rectum is still intact

anyone man or woman whol has never experienced anal put into super painful anal the very first time sounds bizzare to me

as if they hate sandy and want to kill her from rectum tear or intestinal injury

i like non con

but the anal scene sounds like horror movie where cutting of limbs while the person is alive

how can sandy be alive after that

anyone would end up brought dead in emergency ward

makes me wonder

why jake malden makes anal sex

into anal sadism

every single of anal scenes he wrote is always super painful for anyone to survive it let alone soft sandie

are u into anal sadism jake malden like powerone another one makes anal scene super painful