More times then not, We the people of this world are lead to believe that "Looking inward" seems so out of place, alas, we are blinded by the mere fact that "Everything" is so common these days. I loved your story and how you presented that pregnancy in our world should be scared and precious! Most NEW writers come here and present a story for all to read but many do not realize that presenting a story is a journey, a journey that hopefully will continue. Please write and voice whatever you feel inside yourself and don't be afraid of what others may feel or think !
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Anonymous03/18/12
well a different style of story a real softie with sex but in a nice way. Well done.
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As it should be !
More times then not, We the people of this world are lead to believe that "Looking inward" seems so out of place, alas, we are blinded by the mere fact that "Everything" is so common these days. I loved your story and how you presented that pregnancy in our world should be scared and precious! Most NEW writers come here and present a story for all to read but many do not realize that presenting a story is a journey, a journey that hopefully will continue. Please write and voice whatever you feel inside yourself and don't be afraid of what others may feel or think !
well a different style of story a real softie with sex but in a nice way. Well done.
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