All Comments on 'toward a word'

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.<br>

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The whole poem with the exception of the "whistling Dixie" reference, which is slightly bumpy. It's a common phrase to me when you have such new things to say throughout. Very good though, especially the first two strophes.

slouching not to Nirvanna, but to the cabanna of the corner store, Kerouac says you have a rack, but I would hate to be a bore - have a half a banana, you can come back for more. I know I will towards your words. Best I've seen today!