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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/28/08

hard to follow

kind of hard to follow the story. Needs some polish to become average.

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by BedtimeStories7703/29/08

Cute.

i thought it was very cute and witty hon. :)

Good luck with the Earth Day contest!

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