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Black Girl

byWillow Rain©
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by Anonymous

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by KOLKORE03/27/08

Highly sensual

I liked the sensuality which coexisted here with the love that clearly came across...perhaps more like adoring.

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by LeBroz03/28/08

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A more romantically sensuous than hard edge erotic piece. I saw Eve's review on this and I see what she means about some spots needy a tweak. I think, for example, that in the next to last line that, "plant me deep" is almost predictable; I'd leave out the pronoun and just have it read, "plant deep," but that's just me.

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by Anonymous03/30/08

Lovely

Soft and warm but with the sizzle of passion underneath.

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by tazz31709/02/12

FINDING A PERSON YOU LIKE AND CARE ABOUT

except for societies mores, please yourself, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by tazz31709/02/12

#2 PRETTY LITTLE PEARL

open her up and see whats inside, TK U MLJ LV NV

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