All Comments on 'Just Another Day In Paradise Ch. 01'

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Dice_CasdenDice_Casdenalmost 16 years ago
Nice effort

Outside of a few wording problems, it's good. Good luck with future projects.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Get a little more real...

not very realistic; as in size and space

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Uh, right.

..... This is seriously just gross. Proof you're a kid alright.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Interesting..

The Story Was Interesting But You Sure Do Fantasize!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
SEXY!!

THAT STORY WAS SOOOO SEXY !!!!!

U SHOULD MAKE MORE WWE STORIES

THEY HAVE SEXY GUYS

US GIRLS CAN UNDERSTAND

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