All Comments on 'Eirin'

Oh my gosh! You have to continue this story! I need to know what happens!

keep writing

Eager to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!

You've said this is planned as a multi-chapter effort. I'd suggest you need Chapter Numbers, and use Two digits, not just one ie 01 instead of 1, in case you get carried away with your work.

A good read, though as a male, i'm confused by more than three people in a tale.

Looking Forward to more

Cheers,

Kilroy.

Please continue! I read a lot, online and off, and nothing recently has captured my interest like this story. I can't wait to read more! Excellent writing and an interesting plot. I really hope you continue the story.

Great job for your 1st story. Please post the next chapter soon!!

I need to learn more of what will happen to her! MORE MORE please!

I enjoyed your story and congratulate you on making your first effort so enjoyable. I will soon be writing my first submission and I hope it is as good as yours. Don't be too long in writing the next chapter

great beginning so where's the rest?

This story was reviewed early this morning and the review can be found on the Author's Hangout forum on Lit's bulletin boards. ~ RedHairedandFriendly - - - Thanks for the story and I look forward to the remaining chapters. ~ Red

Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon.

At first i didnt know how you would do this story... But it turned out really great! It was a great beginning to a wonderful story.

please keep up the good work. I hope you can write the chapters fast :) I cant wait till i get to read what happens now.

If this is just the beginning, I can't even imagine the next few chapters. You are quite a talented writer.

Keep going with it meg. You know how much I'm loving it!

Aside from the not-so-historical accuracy, I loved the storyline and I hope to read more soon. I also hope there is a happy ending to it, too! The characters you've created are interesting and the cliffhanger on the first chapter was well done.

Being the grand cramudgeon it's hard for me to give praise to a story from a new writer. But this one was very well done and in this case I have to say "Great"

I think the history freaks might have to problem, but there is not need for total accuracy in every case. The writting, style and charm far outweigh the historical inaccuracies.

You captured my interest with your work of art and never let me go. Great work!

The detail of the characters actions, making them unique and believable was very well done.

Thank you for posting this story.

A curiously interesting story that Brits might better identify with. How could that crude old bastard not know it was her first time right away? Didn't turn me on but was pretty good.

It's 3 am here, but how can I go to bed now? Must read next chapter.

I like historical fiction & romance novels set credibly in Georgian/Regency England. I'd say this story is not quite any of those things, but it's an entertaining read--thank you for sharing it! I hope you keep writing, and if you do more stories like this one I hope you'll incorporate more period details.

Wow, every guy in this story is an asshole already and then Eirin get's pretty much brutally raped for her first time :/. That really sucks lol.

Wow. that was kind of horrible.

Loved it!

Just found this great Story. I realy hope the Lord will find out her real identity and marry her... oh and punish the son of a bitch and his daughter who did that to her. 5 stars.

It's like a mix between Cinderella and Beauty and the Beast -- but sexy!

Great start of interesting plot line. But. First part of chaper has the lord written as an old mean curmudgeon. By the chapter end he is remorseful and sprinting up stairs. Lost in the transition. Z

This is the 1800's. One in 3 women or babies died in childbirth. Is having your baby die not permanent harm? Is the harm from being raped not permanent harm? Is death from childbearing fever not permanent harm? He promised not to harm her permanently while unapologetically stating that if she bared a child, he won't claim it. So he knew up front that he was going to put her in danger of death by doing something that could make her pregnant. Wow. It takes effort to be that big of a jerk.

Permanent damage means you are still alive but damaged. Like scarred missing limbs etc. So far his being a Dick but hasn't broken his word.

Not sure how the Lord knows everything but not that the man robbing him is dressing like a vagabond on purpose or what the daughters name is and how she looks. Or that he lives in a Dukes house where the daughter still is. Or how a bastard daughter of a man not in the peerage or a rich merchant with a bastard daughter thinks she can have a coming out and join the ton.

The tale of the Wicked Servant

The innocent are punished and the guilty profit. The beginning of Eirin reads like a cross between a Cinderella story and an Alfred Hitchcock tales with the wicked servant stealing from his ward's money and relegating her to menial chores around the house. Caught in the act of stealing, the wicked servant substitutes Eirin for the servants daughter as a concubine to the Lord.

Unaware Eirin resists the Lord and suffers undeserved consequences.

Although the concept is intriguing, my sole objection to this opener in this series s that Eirin is not self - standing, with an interim resolution of the plot.

Please finish this!

He should know she was a virgin, take her as his own, and then go after Phillip and Melissa.