Eirin

You have to Continue!

Oh my gosh! You have to continue this story! I need to know what happens!

great story

keep writing

Great Job

Eager to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Chapter Headings . .

You've said this is planned as a multi-chapter effort. I'd suggest you need Chapter Numbers, and use Two digits, not just one ie 01 instead of 1, in case you get carried away with your work.
A good read, though as a male, i'm confused by more than three people in a tale.
Looking Forward to more
Cheers,
Kilroy.

Please, please, please continue

Please continue! I read a lot, online and off, and nothing recently has captured my interest like this story. I can't wait to read more! Excellent writing and an interesting plot. I really hope you continue the story.

Can't wait for more!

Great job for your 1st story. Please post the next chapter soon!!

More please

I need to learn more of what will happen to her! MORE MORE please!

Good First Story

I enjoyed your story and congratulate you on making your first effort so enjoyable. I will soon be writing my first submission and I hope it is as good as yours. Don't be too long in writing the next chapter

where's the rest?

great beginning so where's the rest?

Thank you. .. .

This story was reviewed early this morning and the review can be found on the Author's Hangout forum on Lit's bulletin boards. ~ RedHairedandFriendly - - - Thanks for the story and I look forward to the remaining chapters. ~ Red

Great start

Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon.

Love it

At first i didnt know how you would do this story... But it turned out really great! It was a great beginning to a wonderful story.
please keep up the good work. I hope you can write the chapters fast :) I cant wait till i get to read what happens now.

Wonderful story!

If this is just the beginning, I can't even imagine the next few chapters. You are quite a talented writer.

great start!

Keep going with it meg. You know how much I'm loving it!

I loved it

Aside from the not-so-historical accuracy, I loved the storyline and I hope to read more soon. I also hope there is a happy ending to it, too! The characters you've created are interesting and the cliffhanger on the first chapter was well done.

Very good, Meg

Being the grand cramudgeon it's hard for me to give praise to a story from a new writer. But this one was very well done and in this case I have to say "Great"

I think the history freaks might have to problem, but there is not need for total accuracy in every case. The writting, style and charm far outweigh the historical inaccuracies.

Great work

You captured my interest with your work of art and never let me go. Great work!

Very Well Done

The detail of the characters actions, making them unique and believable was very well done.

Thank you for posting this story.

not bad start

A curiously interesting story that Brits might better identify with. How could that crude old bastard not know it was her first time right away? Didn't turn me on but was pretty good.

Thank you

It's 3 am here, but how can I go to bed now? Must read next chapter.

Historical fiction?

I like historical fiction & romance novels set credibly in Georgian/Regency England. I'd say this story is not quite any of those things, but it's an entertaining read--thank you for sharing it! I hope you keep writing, and if you do more stories like this one I hope you'll incorporate more period details.

Wow, every guy in this story is an asshole already and then Eirin get's pretty much brutally raped for her first time :/. That really sucks lol.

ok..

Wow. that was kind of horrible.

Loved it!

WOW

Just found this great Story. I realy hope the Lord will find out her real identity and marry her... oh and punish the son of a bitch and his daughter who did that to her. 5 stars.

It's like a mix between Cinderella and Beauty and the Beast -- but sexy!

Got Lost.

Great start of interesting plot line. But. First part of chaper has the lord written as an old mean curmudgeon. By the chapter end he is remorseful and sprinting up stairs. Lost in the transition. Z