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You are terrible!!!!!
Why do you always do this to me? This is just another one of your great little stories I never want to end for the day. YOU most definitely are one of my favorites
Lemme 'splaine it to you....
X wives make great fuck buddies, and you don't have to marry them or anything!
I know it strings readers along, but short choppy
stories are the pits. You set this one up and ended it in just one page. Hmmm, if I was still calling out my exwifes name after nine years I think I would take myself to a head doctor. That isnt love folks, that is plain crazy. This Mary/Nancy is like most women, especially divorce women, they play the odds and manipulate the man for their own objectives. At least we know assholes life and marriage were also destroyed.
Very good
This is great, a few more twists to keep us confused. Another great one from the master.
DG Hear again
This is the setup for the ending tomorrow. I will guarantee mixed feeling tomorrow. Should be a few comments, at least I hope so. Remember, it's just a story and how one man dealt with it. Thank you for the comments. Sorry about the short chapter.
DG
Not unlike the rest of your readers
I believed I had a sense of where this would go. I should have known better! I envy you your skill in telling brief stories that keep the reader interested but take us somewhere unexpected and also generate interesting and mostly complimentary comments at the end (as I believe if the commenter won't attach an identifier of some sort, she/he/it may be hiding the fact that she/he/it cannot support her/his/its comments so I generally ignore them)In my perfect world, there would be an DGH, an HDK, a Wanderer, A Troubador, a K.K., a Blue88, a celt, an S-Des, a capecodmercury, a headhuntertales,a Longhorn__07,an ohio, a patricia51, a jack_straw, a curious2c,a GaryAPB, an Aussie Bard, an evanslily, a 2Xwidderwoman AND (DON'T LOOK NOW BUT) a just plain bob story for me to read each day. Were this wild and crazy fantasy to actually come true, I would add them to the other authors who if not consistently, do come up with a good story now and then and I would retire (AGAIN) and enjoy reading their work for as long as the Lord saw fit to allow me to remain on this earth. Oh yes, and I would dabble a little in trying to write something of my own in grateful return to each of these contributing authors but, regretfully, that is something that has been escaping me over the last several months as I have not been able to produce anything I would be willing to post yet, but I'll keep trying. Thanks for the story DGH. Sorry for rambling. I'll be up bright and early tomorrow to find out what finally did happen.
A very good story from a very good author
Good story and you still keep them so down-to-earth appealing. Just finished this one over on Storiesonline and enjoyed the ending. Please keep writing, as it is pure enjoyment to so many of us. PT
A really interesting story
This is truly a great work of literature, full of plot twists and meaningful characters. Not the typical shallow storyline but a well fleshed out story.
Well Done.
Nicely done, DG Hear
After a rather boring section 2, this section (3) has the characteristics of the DG Hear writing style. You bring into the story some new angles. I do think I know what is to happen now, but what will be interesting is how you accomplish the reuniting of Rob and Brenda(?). Keep on Mining - RAG
Yet Another.
It is always a pleasure to see your name on a story.
Rob thought about Brenda while making love to Mary seems like a strong sign that he has forgotten how much he
distrusted Brenda. Though as I mentioned in the last chapter
he could be being selfish and trying to have a great companion for the golden years. The question is, if she learned her lesson. If she did, I believe that she loves him.
Enjoying it.
Please keep writing. There aren't enough good stories like this being written. Thanks
Coincidence should be a story's 'middle name.'
The story continues to be good. What I love about a lot of these stories is the coincidence factor. How unusual could it be that our hero ends up sleeping with the 'ex' of the guy who slept with his wife? Perhaps turnabout is fair play? It does create some fun, maybe a feeling of fate, Devine justice, or what goes around, comes around, and it is a nice technique to use in a story. It certainly keeps one's interest because, of course, we are all dying to find out what is going to happen. I definitely can't wait . . .
A compelling read
Similar to chapter one, very compelling narrative even as you guess where the plot might be headed. I find it difficult to imagine how after nine years he could still be so attached to his ex especially given the circumstances of their divorce. Just a difficult premise for me to imagine (or to recall from seeing or hearing of in real life).
Arrrrgghh, not very impressed (sorry)
The first 2 moved me to tears, but this one not really. You kind of destroyed the aura of 'nice' that Rob had. How can he miss his ex-wife for nine years and then jump into eating muff(without even knowing the last name of the muff owner) so easily. Do I really feel for him to go back to brenda after this. I don't really care what he does right now, he seems to be like all the rest of them. I don't even think he deserves Brenda anymore. Nice story teling, except it's not the emotional type of ending I expected to make me fill buckets for days, and I have been checking my computer every hour since yesterday.
Great story
Nice touch with Brian's ex, payback is a bitch.
Brenda the FOOL
That Brenda is such a fool she was much better with Rob than thinking with her puss and fucking with that skirt chaser
Atlanta,Ga
Nice Sidebar
Great mixing in the Earthday lecture ....
Thx
trouble brewing
Forget the cheater.
Still In Love With Brenda?
Maybe he is, but he STILL shouldn't take her back!
First, there is her dumb ass excuse about wondering about "other men". As I said in Part 2, given her pre-marital experience that just makes no sense!
Second, there are her repeated lies - first, nothing happened, then it was only once, then it was a four month affair!
Finally, there was the utter STUPIDITY of seeing (and fucking him!) to "break it off"! If she wanted to break it off, all she had to do was not see him anymore!
SAY A MAN HAS STRONG ISSUES
even issues can not stop any accidents. TK U MLJ LV NV
Enjoying it
five stars. Thanks for the offering.
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