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i love it!
Please give us more soon!
I like it, but
In the beginning, I definitely felt the sexual tension between the two. This last chapter, I didn't feel it as much. I hope they can stop sparring a bit and try to enjoy each other's company. The small tent sounds like a good place to snuggle and talk :)
more, more, more
Love your stories and can't wait to read the next chapters like the title says more more more and please quickly!!!
ooooh
more please!
Love it!
Love it! Please continue! I like these two they get on each others nervous! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks
much better!
You either proofread your work better or found yourself an editor, the grammar errors were less glaring and this chapter flowed much better. I love the obvious tension between the two characters.
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