What rubbish do you expect a girl to be a virgin at 18 just come to know someone in college get so lose with her father on meeting him the first time only slut and whore do that not virgin mature up a bit with yout creativeness.
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Anonymous04/04/08
Liked It
I think u should continue writing... Maybe even a chain of stories with the same two characters
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Anonymous04/04/08
Are u sure she's a virgin?
What kind of virgin just ups and fucks her friend's dad like that? Was she a slut in others ways besides using her pussy or something? I find it hard to believe a barely legal virgin would just fuck someone. What kind of person is she to do her friend's father and have been a virgin? If she was experienced, that would have been belivable.
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Anonymous04/05/08
nice
liked it a lot
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Anonymous04/10/08
hot
this was a hot story. i think that you should continue it because it has room to go lot's of places.
The story should have been little long. There should have been more foreplay. The story could take interesting turns if Ben & Vanessa continue their affair
My daddy now
What rubbish do you expect a girl to be a virgin at 18 just come to know someone in college get so lose with her father on meeting him the first time only slut and whore do that not virgin mature up a bit with yout creativeness.
Liked It
I think u should continue writing... Maybe even a chain of stories with the same two characters
Are u sure she's a virgin?
What kind of virgin just ups and fucks her friend's dad like that? Was she a slut in others ways besides using her pussy or something? I find it hard to believe a barely legal virgin would just fuck someone. What kind of person is she to do her friend's father and have been a virgin? If she was experienced, that would have been belivable.
nice
liked it a lot
hot
this was a hot story. i think that you should continue it because it has room to go lot's of places.
thanks
horny as fuck... not long enough. loved it
The story should have been little long. There should have been more foreplay. The story could take interesting turns if Ben & Vanessa continue their affair
A GOOD BEGINNING
I THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY. IT HAS POTENTIAL.
Very good
Hard to believe, but hot and a nice fantasy.
Great
I enjoyed it alot..I do wish to know what happen between the two of them!
Wow..
I really liked this! I wish there was more :)
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