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I enjoyed this one even more than the previous story. It has all the elements I enjoy plus a sense of humor that added just the right element. My only comment to you is to avoid in the future the two mistakes I have found common. The first is suddenly moving from well written short stories to trying to right a novel. Writing a short story is an art unto itself and extending it takes time and practice. The second is enjoying the praise so much that you do not you end up writing the same basic story over and over and not expanding your talents. Well done on this one. M
Great!
Nice short story!
I didn't care for the
comparison to black guys. Why does that fallacy always have to enter these stories? They're the same as everyone else. Get a life.
That was beautiful
My Man quotes Shakespeare to me including that sonnet =)
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