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Great
Good information about the mine industry in ohio.
Boyd
Almost A Wimp
If the sex is great, keep her around as a fuck buddy. Doesn't mean he's gotta marry her again.
You can stop all of it by borrowing her phone and
calling Mary and asking her over. Never ever take a cheater back. Next time they may be more careful with their adultry and when they get bored or tired or unsatisfied or mad at you or whatever they will do it again.
Are these stories starting to demean men?
Is it me, or are these stories starting to demean men? Rob: Maybe I'll take her back, since there are only about 3 billion other women in the world so maybe I'll never find another one that wouldn't fuck around on me? She didn't show up at the first accident but showed up at this one, but after all she had some guy's dick in her ass on that first one? And she only lied a few white lies, risked our family and health for fun, OK, so mistakes can be made? And she only screwed a couple of times since our vows, once by the Bears and once by the Red Chinese army. And screwing the other guys wife makes it even kinda; but since even the other wife admits your wife traded soooo down to fuck her exhusband, your ex wife is pathetic (kinda like fucking your wife's rapist's wife to get even, so what?!?!). And she's a real sex machine, and now finally claims 20-30 years after the wedding that I finally get her sex machine exclusive. For awhile anyway. And she really, really wants me now, I think, since she even broke a date with another guy for me?? Does wimp or moron cover it best?? I know, its only a story.
why not
just live with her and fuck her ...instead of marrying her ...after all she said that also
Nice ending to a good story.
I find it hard to believe that so many readers would think that he should never forgive her. As far as finding another woman, he's obviously tried, but unsuccessfully. He admits that she was a great mother, and they shared many good years together. Admittedly, she screwed up royally, but his girls are anxious to see them reconcile, and I don't think they would do that if they didn't believe she could be faithful in the future. He's lonely and hasn't much of a life, so why shouldn't he take a chance again. He doesn't have much to lose, and a lot to gain. It's apparent that she still loves him, so I say go for it.
if you're happy
If it makes him more happy than he has been in the past 9 to 10 years, the choice seems easy. He hasn't been celibate during that period, and apparently she hasn't. So ? It's a choice each person would have to make for himself, regardless how others feel about it. G.Belgium
I'm glad...
that you left it open-ended. There might be a reconciliation on the way, but it's for the readers to think about. And who knows, maybe love will indeed be better the second time around. They are both older now, and have lived separate lives for the past 10 years, and have not found happiness with other people. I think the wife will be faithful this time around since she's older and wiser now, and has already suffered the consequences of her infidelity. Thanks DGH for info about the coal mining industry, and for sharing your talent!
I'm glad
In a real world where dating women drop guys cause they don't like the way he holds a salad fork or the color of the car he drives or how he parts his hair, its nice to know that practically all the genius commentators here, giving such high scores, would gladly let some guy repeatly fuck their wife's ass (see story for details) and still take her back, if it made them feel good.
Hi there! DG Hear again
Well, some of you have read Part 4. First, I want to say thank you for sticking around and also thank you to those who didn't give away the ending. (Another site posted it a day earlier)
I spent a lot of time on the ending. I changed it a few times. I finally put myself in Rob's shoes and asked myself what I might do in the same situation? I followed that advise and wrote the ending.
Would everyone react the same? Of course not! This is one man and his life and how he dealt with it. Love it, hate it, we all make choices. Oh, by the way, before tearing me apart; it was just a story. Thank you all for reading and commenting.
With respect,
DG Hear
Great story
(as usual),but It occured to me that IF the first accident had not happened,she could have gone on "seeing" the other guy for a long time and Rob would still have had no idea.It is just a story(and a good one),but bearing in mind my comments I would have gone back to my own apartment,hired a nurse and told Brenda to go away(and that is being polite)Keep up the stories,they are one of the bright rays of sunshine amongst the dross that is now appearing on this site.
What is wrong....?
What is wrong with some people? A really good story about a woman who made a mistake and a man who although still not sure wants that woman around. From my point of view I don't really believe that once a cheater ALWAYS a cheater in my experience there is normally a reason why someone cheats and it and it is normally a problem caused by both parties.
We as humans make mistakes every single day and I am not being gender biased here but both men and woman make mistakes. 10 years is a long time to be away from someone you really love and yes I agree this is a story but in real life ex-husbands and wives get together all the time and live happily ever after. So those who don't like the story cut DG some slack he WRITES great stories and as someone who has just started writing I know how hard it can be.
I knew it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I always knew it !!!!!!!
Deep down, you are just a big romantic marshmallow . . . just like me! I love your stories and although this one was far from your best, I loved it anyway. Just for the record, cageytee was divorced over 25 years ago. The former Mrs cageytee is still single and on her own and we encounter each other frequently as we share 4 grandchildren and she has made no secret about her willingness to "have another go at it". "Any time . . . any place." was how she put it. With her, it would be reality . . . not something I would be remotely interested in doing and I'm sure I have made that quite clear but . . . I am aware, painfully so, that all too many of our commenters have a great deal of difficulty separating a story (like this) from reality and they allow themselves to become unreasonably upset with the "story". In a story, anything can happen and often does. In my mind, that's why we call them stories. They evoke imagination which may be why a few commenters get so upset but for those who have the strength of character to recognize and enjoy it for what it is, a story, we can enjoy it and as always DGH, wait anxiously for more.
Enjoyed it.
Thanks DG. Please write more. I hate those wimp stories where the husband turns into some sort of perverse freak slave. This was believable and entertaining. Glenn in NC
Thanks!
A story I can enjoy,thanks again!
greattttt story
Really enjoyed this series, keep up the good work..
Interesting.......
story, DG. I enjoyed parts and shook my head over others. Not my favorite from you, by a long shot, but still a good read. I wish you well in the contest and I look forward to joining you in the next writing invitational.
well..........
Overall, I liked the story line. (I'm not sure it's up to your usual quality, to be frank.) Honestly, I didn't care much for how things developed in this last chapter. It seemed that moving in with his ex was crammed down his throat, a conspiracy between her and their daughters. Yeah, the set-up was all there and it's not an illogical ending to the story; but I didn't care much for how it developed. But, do keep writing. I like your work.
-- KK in Texas
Thank You!
Thank you,DGH,for a great story!So true to life(for me).I think they will remarry and be happy together.
more good work by an outstanding author
A little different than your normal work but very good work still.
Excellent story
It was one of the best stories that I have seen in awhile. keep up the good work. I will be looking at some of your other stories, hopefully they are just as good. It reminded me of a couple that I once knew.
Husband has no backbone
The union's health plan would pay for a nurse; he didn't need the kids to pay. The company would have pulled out all the stops for a hero. Why would he risk being cared for by ex-wife. Even if she didn't decide on a night out, she has no training for nursing.
Through out the story the husband is reactive. Gets pushed into a divorce, gets pushed into giving a talk, gets pushed into ex-wifes apartment, watches as ex-wife cuts up his underwear. Even meeting Bill's ex was entirely driven by others. Might as well invest his savings in lottery tickets.
Great story
I agree with Zeb40. They have been separated for almost 10 years but seem to still love each other. Go for it. I can't believe the number of apparent woman haters among your readers whose only response to any story is "kill the bitch". You write a fine sory DG but I guess you can't please all the people all the time. Keep up the great wrting.
60 year old George
Great Story
Loved the ending, I knew he would take her back.
Pure Pleasure
Lots of interesting details. Obviously if after ten years
he has gotten over his lack of trust and fear of being once
again a victim. Then there is no reason for not getting hitched again, except, it would be so much simpler to cure
any new problems if they do not sign any papers. In this modern day and age this old fogey is used to seeing a lot of couples who do not get married on paper but are obviously married in their hearts. He has not found anything better
in ten years. Why not get back together and see if it works.
Very good!
Well written tale with great characters, that's one reason I like longer ones, more time to flesh them out. In real life people grow, change, and mellow, same happened here. They might get remarried but they will be close no matter what. A very good story like you are known for, Thanks for the effort.
Thanks
An enjoyable story. I am not sure I agree with how you ended it but its your ending and I can see it. Thanks for your time and your words.
I have to agree
I have to agree with Anon in Texas, everyone did cram his ex down his throat and it just didn't go with his character. Reconcile at any cost? I could see it happening after 10 years, but not like this.
I loved it!
You told us how it would end in the opening paragraph. However you spun an amazing story afterwards with all its little twists and turns. It was up to your usual standards. Some might argue that that having sex with his ex was tantamount to acceptance of what she had done. Reconciliation does not always have to end in remarriage. However, I think the ending was perfect. Rob is a man in turmoil. She hurt him deeply with her betrayal in his time of need. However, he is having one hell of a time getting over her. It could go either way, thank you for writing.
Overall, a nice, romantic story.
We may not all agree on how the "story should turn out," but most of us, I bet, agree that the story was nicely written, it was reasonably consistent, and we can't knock a story just because it has a happy ending. Perhaps a lot of us don't experience the "happy ending" very often but it does happen on occasion. I agree with the comments of other readers; in real life, a lot of ex's still get together. After all, the ex has the same qualities you liked the first time around, and those were qualities that attracted you once and might again. Obviously the relationship would be more cautiously developed, because it does take time to trust someone again. But are we to say that no one is permitted a second chance? Surely some deserve it . . . Anyway, it was a nice story. The only negative was that a bit of the story turned out to be erotic . . .
Rob needs some dating standards
Site responses seem to be going PC (requiring comment without criticism). Positive responses seem to focus on wife's mistake, and husband's choices/happiness, and unless the written ending is agreed with, commentator must hate women. 1)A mistake is hitting the gas instead of the brake, it is not allowing a nonspouse to repeatedly insert his privates into the wife's orafices. That requires intent. 2)Husband could make lots of choices that might make him happy: lobotomy, take heroin, Russian roulette, chicken on the highway, sex with mom/dad/both(?), etc. Point is, with those as here, many might characterize Rob's happy choice as stupid, ridiculous, and possibly even insane. How many times are they down this path? She'd sown her oats, Rob overlooked it and married her. She did it again and betrayed the marriage and family. Now she's middle aged and trying to regain what she lost for still another go round. Her prospects don't seem too great (1 [middle aged] guy rings the phone every 2 weeks) so her claims of love seem hollow as 10 years ago. Even if she does "love" Rob and he loves her, does that require that she become his beloved? His 10 year grudge trumped by a lack of self esteem and dating skills. Just a story, might even happen this way in real life, but still is distateful: betrayal, humiliation, damage to love and family, 10+ lost years. Mary had more balls than to do same for her ex.
TYPICAL CRAP FROM THIS CLOWN
This board really needs something lower than oo---maybe WHALE SHIT, that's in the bottom of the ocean! That's where this author and story belong.
Very Human & Real
...and very informative about the coal mining. It's true that most people don't make the connection between coal and their electric. I do wonder, though, does reclamation really work when the entire top has been removed from a mountain?
Funny how much heat this story generated, about the relationships and all. You'd think it in the Loving Wives category, which is one in which all the readers' issues and hurts seem to come to the fore. Frequently what they say about the story says more about them than it does about the story.
As usual, a great story with real human emotions
DGH,
Those of us who come here to read and know that I writing skills are not up to the standards set by some on this board, owe you and the other good writers on the board a vote of thanks.
It is hard work to create a story like, "The Coal Miner." It is easy to make cruel comments not in any way connected to the writing ability shown in the story. It is especially easy when you hide behind the name. "Anonymous". IMHO Anonymous comments and votes should not be accepted. Let those of us who are willing to come forward with out comments be heard, let the cowardly one who are afraid to even receive a PM be totally anonymous.
Thank you again for another great submission.
Why is some feel that not going back for nasty
seconds means kill the bitch. You can be friends with your ex without having sex or being comfy coszy with them. Death is the only alternative. Trust and openness is something we give to a person when we meet until the show that those are not really on option. Getting back with someoone you know you cant trust by experience seems an impssible mountain to hurdle. You can bang the ex as a "boyfriend" without committing to a relationship or romance. Personally if I were betrayed by a woman she wouldnt have to worry about it because I would never speak to her again and if I had the choice would not see her again. That is difficult when young children are involved but can be handled if you want it done. Put another way there are to many pussies in the world to get over involved in one used alley cat.
NICE STORY
Excellent writing, as usual. The plot was very interesting. I especially liked the references to the hidden intentions or agendas of female behavior making it sound like a sub-culture or a conspiracy. I’ve seen “Mike’s list” of words and their female interpretations, before. Who knows, maybe you’re the one that developed the list. I enjoyed it, just the same. The ending was classic. The way you showed the female subculture in action. When Brenda and their daughters conspired to maximize the amount of time Rob had to stay in close quarters with Brenda and rely on her for almost all his needs. Even enlisting the daughters’ husbands to clear out Rob’s things from his apartment and then sub-letting it so he had nowhere else to live. While Brenda made his favorite meals, paraded around nude and the "coup de gras" relieving him of his sexual tension. Rob never had a chance. Did I say female sub-culture? How does that prophesy go, “The meek shall inherit the earth.” I always thought it referred to meek men, I wonder. Thanks DG another enjoyable story.
GREAT STORY
Loved this one as well as MANY of the others you have written. Thank you very much for your time and efforts. Know it is appreciated.
bill?
he was at a time when she was being re-devoted rob? that sense of knawing trust would bother me. he has other options, nancy, and he puts himself to get burned again?
ahhhh!!
come on man, im all for a happy ending, but for fucks sake, it doesnt have to the be the cheating spouse-man or woman. ill be upfront, im not the forgive and forget type but idk, it might be possible if it was a one time incident and she was upfront with me, but frankly its doubtful. that being said, its not just sex, its not just our fragile male ego and no, you dont love me if you slept around on me. now, while your story was somewhat interesting, i didnt like how you have your characters all say it sucks she cheated, but you should take her back because she loves you and it was all a mistake. so she made a mistake over and over again, for months? so she made a mistake fucking another man when her husband could have died? why cant you write a more realistic story? and yes, i know this is a mostly erotic fantasy site, but that doesnt stop people from wanting a story they can relate to. and they cant relate to your stories when the children, family, friends, basically everyone says stop being a jackass and take her back because you both still love each other? now how fucking realistic is it that not one of his fucking friends or family took his side? how realistic is it that they got back together after several yrs? you suck dg hear because you write the same story, change the title, and tell us "look what ive done!"a
Good story, crap ending
Very disappointing after the three great earlier chapters. Rob's character is changed in this part that you might be writing about someone completely different.
There are SO MANY things wrong with the last two chapters that I can't mention all of them.
So, I'll just mention two.
1) The GOD DAMN Miners Insurance would cover ALL of the round the clock nursing he would need. Just the publicity of them doing less than that would be more expensive to the mine.
2) He was never a wimp at any time. So, why would he wimp out when he had alternatives? Answer, he would not.
I'm sorry to see such talent wasted by the unreal reconciliations that the author frequently creates out of nothing.
Loved the ending. He showed he had real strength
in accepting his wife's apology.
Truly a humanistic story
Wonderfully woven tale of mature people with hearts of gold
Being right, Being happy: Choose
Brenda had broken it off with Cooter before she was busted. Unless I misread the story, Cooter only came to town once a month, possibly more but since he was married not a whole lot more. To her credit she knew it was wrong and after each time, she made the decision to end it -- not let it happen again. I don't think the outside observer understands how easy it is to "do it again" once you have done something especially if somebody like Cooter is "playing" you. That's not an excuse but certainly should be a mitigating factor when determining what course to take.
Rob did what was right **for him** by divorcing Brenda. He found over the 9 or 10 years of living alone that he still loved Brenda and missed her. He had to avoid being alone with her to keep from start seeing her again. He really tried to do what he thought was the right thing.
Rob risked serious prison time taking care of Cooter when he learned he was harrassing her. Sounds like a man who cares about a woman. He called a woman to whom he was making love, "Brenda," not once but twice.
Is she going to cheat again? Maybe. All indicators and evidence says 'no.' Marriage is not the question. Will he be happier with her again or without her. The answer to that question is obvious. Rob has to choose between **being right** (about her cheating) or **being happy** (with her in his life). The answer should be pretty obvious.
Well told tale, DG.
HOSPITALS INDUCE STRANGE BEDFELLOWS
and recuperation seperates the weak and the strong, TK U MLJ LV NV
A DG Cuck classic of pompous stupidity
My favorite part is when his whore wife and kids "'make" him go live with the skank again and he just goes along with it. Cause golly gee , what is a guy to do? Profoundly stupid.
Time Is A Great Healer
Too many commenters forget that time spent with a loved one is not easily forgotten. This story was a 5.
Wimp
She lied to you before she will do it again. Your kids love you and set you up with the bitch. With kids like that you don't need enemies. The insurance company would have paid to have a nurse come in and take care of him. I was married for 28 years, have 3 kids and have been divorced for 11 years. I would disown and never talk to my kids if they did something that stupid to me.CC1B
Good story
till this chapter. Did he lose his balls while rescuing the students? She was a lying slut. If he still had his balls he would have had Mary/Nancy come visit him in the hospital and told his ex-wife to piss off.
After reading only page 1 of this chapter
I abandoned it. Classic cuck story. 1 star.
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