This story is in desperate need of an editor and proofreader. Fantasy is one thing but even in fantasy stories there is a degree of plausibility. That did not exist here.
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This story is in desperate need of an editor and proofreader. Fantasy is one thing but even in fantasy stories there is a degree of plausibility. That did not exist here.
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