All Comments on 'A Private Party'

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DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 16 years ago
Very good!

Different from your others and still well done! Your progress is outstanding. Boy is Hank in for a surprise. This was a fun story, glad you did it.

jacqui4u2jacqui4u2about 16 years ago
loved it

great hook at the end. well done.

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