Youre almost there. Youve got some good ideas but you need to gather your thoughts better and I also recomend switching up the POV (at least in this story, it works sometimes, but not here). Im a stoner to so I understand your finding difficulty in gathering your thoughts. Keep at it, you can do it.
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Wood in the woods
Excellently done!
good work, but
Youre almost there. Youve got some good ideas but you need to gather your thoughts better and I also recomend switching up the POV (at least in this story, it works sometimes, but not here). Im a stoner to so I understand your finding difficulty in gathering your thoughts. Keep at it, you can do it.
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